of Hope is the 2nd book in the Popcorn Miracles book series.
Kernels represent problems of all sizes that burst under heat and become
the sights, sounds smells, feelings around the event or action as much
Example of tell: Bob was angry.
Example of show: With a beet-red face and balled fists, Bill stomped down the hallway and kicked the door open.
Add some dialogue to make the story come alive. Don't only use attributes like "This can't be happening," she said. Add some action beats to your dialogue.
beat: She slammed the letter on the desk and cried. "This can't be
Use adverbs sparingly like "really" and other "ly" words.
passive voice with active--e.g.
all Christianese as much as possible.
mentor, James Scott Bell says, "Craft a knockout ending."
Finally we close every story with a verse.
Word counts of 700 up to 1500 words will be considered. You can send more than one story, but only send one copy of each submission.
the story in first person.
We are using the following books in the order of authority:
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